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 just a thought
« Thread Started on Dec 5, 2009, 12:47am »

i dont no , dont ask me cos i aint got the answers,you just need to stand your ground,stick up for yer self, and keep on takin chances.your on your own,but not for long,the revolutions coming, televised on cctv,ill be their you will see . released from all this fuckery,you need to scream need to shout let em no what were about let them no that were united, come together be as one,unstoppable forever strong.take controll,make it right,the futures in our hands. alright ,alright.immigration bent mps.living lives of luxery.who we got to vote for?,there s not much of a choice,need to come together in unison, all of us one voice, rise up rise up get up stand up got to fight the fight this youth aint gonna make it,untill we put it right. alright alright. Absolute power corrupts absolutely,but i can tell you this resolutely unless we act real fast and get the correct reaction,we wont have chance to implement the joy thats thesolution .
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« Reply #1 on Dec 5, 2009, 9:39am »

i can't tell a good poem from a bad one, so i won't comment on it mate. Ant or one of the regulars will do that, but i will say welcome to the forum, hope to see you posting elsewhere aswell haha ;)
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« Reply #2 on Dec 5, 2009, 6:59pm »

It's good. I like it. I like the way you've structure it too. But... I'm OCD for garmmar...
Haha. There's a few mistakes in their. Doesn't make the poem bad, But I'd love it more if it was right. :P But yeah. I like it. And welcome!!! :)
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« Reply #3 on Dec 6, 2009, 1:17pm »

also like it :) should have been in other tat really but doesnt matter, very much in the theme of the sort of things i like.
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